Thank you, MJ.
If he asks about it then I will explain my plan to him.
Oo-hii does not ask questions, but watches you and the needle warily from his position on the home tree. When you figure out the trick of projecting your thoughts without contacting a specific mind, you begin your ritual; Oo-hii does not join in, but neither does he interrupt.
Your movement of the neelde is somewhat clumsy, but you manage the required motions. At the end, you feel that you are tapping in to supernatural forces - becoming a conduit for energies from outside of normal reality. On cue, the force sphere surrounding the rift begins to twist and contract.
::You're getting rid of the shield now, yes? We can go through soon?::
The rift is not responding how it should. It is bending and warping, as you wanted, but it seems to be working against the force field, not with it, almost like it's fighting back -
- and all at once there is a flash of pinkish light and a wave of force and heat passes painlessly through you. Space seems to ripple around you with the force of the explosion, and you hear Oo-hii cry out in surprise and pain.
The rift still stands. The force shield is gone.
The forest still stands, but the explosion has ripped through underbrush and knocked down small trees for as far as your incorporeal eye can see. Everything is at least scorched or singed, and anything particularly dry and flammable - for example, the leaf litter on the forest floor, in many places - has caught fire.
Your mother's thoughts intrude, frantic:
::Morach!! Baby, can you hear me? Are you alright?::
Oo-hii is battered, smoking, and furious.
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Subjectively, does your character experience the density perception as something more akin to eyesight or more akin to a priori knowledge?
On to the ritual:
My guess is that this is not strictly operating on the rift itself, but rather it seeks to manipulate reality around the rift such that it interacts differently with its surroundings. As such, the spell is a M15@8 Alter Space, and Maxx starts off with a -81 penalty for his mere M7@7 character bias. Assume maximum world bias (I'll consider the issue if the roll is within fifteen percent of a break point) for +15, and unless his An-Mag is level 2 (is it?), his BRA is his 1@10 Intuition for +20; no teacher, no instructor, no example. That leaves -46 before ritual sit-mods.
Oddly, he has all three categories of component (verbal, somatic, material), despite his unusual circumstances. I'm allowing thought projection to substitute for spoken words at no penalty (though a skill roll will be required at amateur Thought Projection SALs; this time it's free because skill learning success is guaranteed, congratulations on your 1@1 SAL for the 33 rolled, remind me to add that to your sheet, Maxx); I'm ignoring the adjustments for "sound necessary" and "forceful/sung", but granting +5 for appropriate words.
Somatically, he really on has one body part: his position. It is involved, and no other part may be substituted, which is baseline. I will not be convinced to award the bonus for "fully body involvement" in this case. However, I'm willing to grant +10 for the requirement that the caster's spirit must be separated from his body for the casting.
Materially, he needs a force field and a metal needle. The metal needle is a common manufactured object of a specified but general material, for +3. The force field is somewhat harder to come by, so I'll give a value of six, doubled because the shield is consumed, for a total of +12 for the shield.
Baseline time factor is nine minutes. The ritual is twelve (the last two minutes are just the magic taking effect, requiring no involvement from the caster), which is 33% of a doubling for +3. Baseline duration is RS minutes, but permanent Alter Space effects are allowed at only -25.
Ritual factors thus total -2 (+5 verbal, +10 miscellaneous, +15 material, +3 TF, -25 duration), for a total modified skill learning success chance of -48 if the ritual is arcane. I'm assuming it is, so that's an 84% chance to fail and a 14% chance to botch. Let's see the roll:
89.
Just not your day, is it?
Well, it's an alter reality spell that directly manipulates space, so
most bets are off. As a bonus, the intended effect was meant to take couple of minutes to manifest, so might I have an excuse to draw out whatever catastrophe is lucky enough to be picked from the following table:
1) Tear rift wider (way wider)
2) Open new gate
3) Shift universe into the border supernatural
4) Magical anomaly
5) Implosion
6) Explosion
7) Summon malignant entity
8) All living entities in locality swap universes
9) Locality swap (closes rift)
10) Trans-universe spirit exchange program (does not)
11) Extract dual locality into pocket dimension
12) Closure apparently unsuccessful (force shield consumed)
And the roll is: 6, Explosion. Ah, well. I was hoping for something more closely related to the nature of the mishap, but explosions are nice too, I guess.
The dual GE roll for damage/area is fun though: 13 for damage (Lethal + Annoying, which is "barely good enough") and 19 for area of effect (primary blast radius of 1 Mile, "not thwarting, but generally unfavorable"). Also, it occurs to me that we don't know for certain how close Maxx's parents (and body) are, so we'll need a GE for that, too: 18, "not favorable". It's been nearly half an hour, so they'll have gone some distance away, but not, I think, so far as a mile; I'd want at least Barely Good Enough for that. After all, there is no clear and present threat from their perspective, only an unusual paranormal occurance and odd behavior from their child. They will be out of sight of rift, probably near water, but within the primary blast radius.
Damage: 45 lethal, 76 annoying rider, that's 9 intensities of kinetic damage + 1 intensity heat and flame, total ten intensities. Maxx's damage value is currently 1@5, so he'll survive, and his parents will also. They get simple TV checks to reduce the damage, and I'll let Lelach's cover Maxx as well: Morani 14, Lelach 22. That'll succeed for Morani due to a high Agility, but even if I granted Lelach a 1@10 Intuition, she'd need a 2@7 Agility to achieve a TV of 2@3, so that's failure for her and the child she carries. Morani takes Dangerous + (Annoying -10), for (5+1=) six intensities, but Lelach and Morach each take the full ten. All the principal players live, but the flora and fauna are in a bad way. (Six intensities out to two miles, four out to three, none after that. Six miles diamater meaningfully impacted.)
Oh, forgot Oo-hii: 31 is certainly above his target value, so he takes full damage, which he certainly survives.